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Endgame Voluntary Eradicators Book 1 eBook Nenia Campbell

Volera (Vol) is our protagonist. She's feisty, fairly snarky and a lil bit kickas$ too, but I didn't like her. Why? Well, it seemed too much. Something was off about her from the first word.

Things seemed to be perfectly placed in the story to tease us about a bigger plot twist, but it'd dart temptingly close then disappear again. This shows Nenia's ability to write, but it didn't impact on the characters as it should have. Their reactions felt wrong.

The world building in this book is vast and quite creative. I'd have liked a little more in each Virtual Reality (VR), but it was a good base to start with.

Our love interest/s, well, I'm all for the silent, brooding type, or the slightly creepy a-hole type, or even the mentally deranged. But what I don't like is all of them smooshed into one person. That one person surrounded by a bevy of other 'prissy' boys that seem too pretty to possibly of interest to Vol. Eugh! Pass me a bucket, I'm going to be sick!

The story was a little confusing at times, like it felt that some of the scene changes weren't obvious. One minute we're talking with a character, the next we're in a game, the next we're dreaming... it was quite confusing in parts. Not the whole thing, just a couple of important parts. I think a little clearing up of scene changes would help that a lot.

As part of a series, you don't really get any sort of closure at the end of this one. I don't like that. It also needs a serious edit. There's a lot of superfluous words that can be cut, clunky wording and of course, typos. I've listed the typos I found, but there's probably a few I missed.

If you like gaming, you'll enjoy the world this is set in. If you're a sci-fi fan, you'll probably enjoy this. If you're neither, don't go near it with a 50ft pole.

11% - ...throwing of(f) dazzling diamonds...
21% - ...foot hits something stuff (either stop at something or change stuff to stiff or solid).
22% - ...cold win(d) nips at her...
28% - ...slams the doors hut (door shut)
33% - I bet (beg) to differ...
...in his face For (for) tricking her...
37% - The creatures (delete the s) approaches her...
42% - ...and the sun's days (rays) skewer...
47% - ...ground beneath t he (the) building...
80% - ...would be aloud (a loud) silence;
95% - ...in two worlds as (at) once.
96% - Not(-)Vol's nails...


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Endgame Voluntary Eradicators Book 1 eBook Nenia Campbell Reviews

First half was rough, but second half made it all worth it!

Volera is a Player; she helps provide entertainment for the virtual reality games that are hugely popular. But she can't remember her past, and strange occurrences, nightmares, and blackouts make her think that a particular guy has an unhealthy interest in her.

Trying to define my feelings towards this book is tough. The first half is so dense, so confusing, so slow. It really is pure world-building. I'll admit, more than once I grew frustrated at this book. "I want to like you!" I would yell at it. "Why are you being so confusing to me?! Why can't you just give some answers?!"

But this book reminds me of "Dune" in that regard you're reading it and wondering, "WTF is going on?!" When suddenly, the clouds part and it JUST MAKES SENSE. It takes a long time, but when you get to that point, the light bulb turns on and the book pages fly by.

And that is my experience with this book. I got past that 50% mark and suddenly, I got it. I got the characters. I got the story. Even the cultures and society which had been a stumbling block were making sense. That is what picked this up from a 3 star to a 4 star.

This book won't be for everyone, but if you like cyber punk and don't want drippy heroines, this is your book.

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Still as great as the first time around. I remembered absolutely nothing so I felt like I was reading it for the first time again, which was great. I got to be blown away by the last few chapters again. This series is so promising!
Ms. Campbell, writes a good story. The quality is better than most of the kindle "freebies". I have an interest already in gaming and I was curious as to where she would go with the idea. This is a good introduction to her series.
Positives - interesting concepts and storyline
Negatives - there are many positions (weaver, designer, player, etc) that are mentioned but I felt could use more flesing out. I realize that maybe the author was advised to edit out some of the back story to move things along. Maybe these were left on the cutting room floor.
So this book was very interesting to say the least, took a bit of time to finish due to getting book crazy. But I did it!
And lets just say WOW... I'll admit in a few spots I was a tad irritated and confused lol
But that probably didn't help that I was getting a tad confused on who was who a few times, just due to some side characters were mentioned then you wouldn't see them again for a few chapters. So the story follows your main character Volera aka Vol and she's this really snarky character which I loved, nothing to me spells good character then one with some bite to it ) She's a gamer and the authors created this world where its futuristic/science fiction, with gaming to the next level. Seriously I'd want to be in this world who wouldn't want to get hooked up and be in the game rather then sitting on the couch or computer chair starring at a screen all day? The world build was great I loved getting little tid bits on the different world places, it was nice rather then when some authors go a dump ten pages on just one long description. This was not that however. I enjoyed the suspense and not knowing certain things and getting to figure out finally what was wrong with Vol I was going crazy towards the end not knowing stuff about her and Catan. Which lets just say *fans self Catan may have been overly mysterious but mmhmm lets just say he was not minded lol
Details and snidbits on game background were another of my favorite I liked getting to know more on what kinda game she was playing etc. The ending probably was my favorite everything fell into place nicely. And questions were answered and I felt fulfilled. All in all I highly enjoyed this book and will definitely be looking for the next installment.
Volera (Vol) is our protagonist. She's feisty, fairly snarky and a lil bit kickas$ too, but I didn't like her. Why? Well, it seemed too much. Something was off about her from the first word.

Things seemed to be perfectly placed in the story to tease us about a bigger plot twist, but it'd dart temptingly close then disappear again. This shows Nenia's ability to write, but it didn't impact on the characters as it should have. Their reactions felt wrong.

The world building in this book is vast and quite creative. I'd have liked a little more in each Virtual Reality (VR), but it was a good base to start with.

Our love interest/s, well, I'm all for the silent, brooding type, or the slightly creepy a-hole type, or even the mentally deranged. But what I don't like is all of them smooshed into one person. That one person surrounded by a bevy of other 'prissy' boys that seem too pretty to possibly of interest to Vol. Eugh! Pass me a bucket, I'm going to be sick!

The story was a little confusing at times, like it felt that some of the scene changes weren't obvious. One minute we're talking with a character, the next we're in a game, the next we're dreaming... it was quite confusing in parts. Not the whole thing, just a couple of important parts. I think a little clearing up of scene changes would help that a lot.

As part of a series, you don't really get any sort of closure at the end of this one. I don't like that. It also needs a serious edit. There's a lot of superfluous words that can be cut, clunky wording and of course, typos. I've listed the typos I found, but there's probably a few I missed.

If you like gaming, you'll enjoy the world this is set in. If you're a sci-fi fan, you'll probably enjoy this. If you're neither, don't go near it with a 50ft pole.

11% - ...throwing of(f) dazzling diamonds...
21% - ...foot hits something stuff (either stop at something or change stuff to stiff or solid).
22% - ...cold win(d) nips at her...
28% - ...slams the doors hut (door shut)
33% - I bet (beg) to differ...
...in his face For (for) tricking her...
37% - The creatures (delete the s) approaches her...
42% - ...and the sun's days (rays) skewer...
47% - ...ground beneath t he (the) building...
80% - ...would be aloud (a loud) silence;
95% - ...in two worlds as (at) once.
96% - Not(-)Vol's nails...